"Where I Lived And What I Lived For": Rhetorical Analysis

The essay seeks to explore Henry David Thoreau’s essay “Where I Lived and What I Lived For,” and make a rhetorical analysis of the literary devices he uses to communicate his views about a simplistic life. The essay will discuss how Thoreau effectively uses antithesis, simile, repetition, rhetorical questions, paradox, deductive logic, and allusion to create a strong message about the importance of living a simple life.

Rhetorical Analysis of Thoreau’s “Where I Lived and What I Lived For”

In the opening paragraph of the essay, Thoreau uses antithesis to explain his reasons for going to the woods. He emphasizes that not going to the woods would have left him with lifelong regrets. Furthermore, Thoreau purposefully connects a simile with some of his cited ideas in an effort to obtain the audience’s attention. Since Thoreau provides a comparison with each of his claims, his readers are able to effectively understand and relate to, on a personal level, his view of an idealized life. An example of a simile employed by Thoreau in paragraph 2 is:

“An honest man has hardly need to count more than his ten fingers, or in extreme cases he may add his ten toes, and lump the rest.”

Thoreau used this simile to underscore his idea of a perfect life and builds a greater connection between the audience and his idea.

Thoreau utilizes repetition in an effort to stress that the audience must lead a simple life; for example, in paragraph 2, Thoreau exclaims, “Simplicity, simplicity, simplicity!”. He clearly wants the audience to lead a life in which they only have what they need, not what they want. Another example of repetition employed by Thoreau is:

"Let us rise early and fast, or breakfast, gently and without perturbation; let company come and let company go, let the bells ring and children cry."

In this statement, Thoreau is, once again, emphasizing that people should enjoy what life gives them and make the most of it, without lamentation. Lastly, Thoreau also states: “It is error upon error, and clout upon clout…”; in this sentence, Thoreau attempts to emphasize constant human error and that power and energy are wasted on crafting the “perfect life.”

By beginning the third paragraph with a rhetorical question, Thoreau is able to extend this question and apply it to the entire paragraph, while initially pulling in the reader to his thoughts by determining whether the reader agrees or disagrees with him. Thoreau indirectly answers this question by including metaphors and examples, such as, “Men say that a stitch in time saves nine, and so they take a thousand stitches today to save nine tomorrow,” which support his purpose to the audience: for everyone to live a simplistic life. Thus, Thoreau is able to both make the reader think about their current lives and how happy they are, while supporting his point of view effectively.

The phrase, “starved before we are hungry,” is said by Thoreau because he is trying to convey that people want to rush through their life and focus on the future, rather than enjoying each moment in the present. Through his starvation metaphor, Thoreau is able to capture the attention of the reader as it is somewhat hyperbolic — he makes us aware that worrying about what may happen is bringing on unnecessary mental distraught, which is what we set out to avoid. Other examples of paradox from this excerpt of Walden include: “I have always been regretting that I was not as wise as the day I was born,” which is Thoreau’s attempt to convey that his has found life to be damaging for the whimsical mind of a child.

The rhetorical effect applied by Thoreau in the fourth paragraph intends to convey that society attempts to achieve a worthless goal as most people are unable to see beyond what they are currently facing, which minimizes their mental capacity, thus, forcing each individual to only look after themselves. This makes members of society selfish and history has proven that this is a vicious cycle in society that will not cease until society understands life’s limits. Despite differences in symbols, this message is still applicable in the 21st century as we all work for ourselves and are out for ourselves.

Based on the context of the paragraph, it seems as if Thoreau is being critical of people who depend on news, claiming that they lose sense of themselves because they are misled by the news, which causes them to only inertly scratch the surface of reality or what’s in front of them. Following the anecdote, Thoreau criticizes the preacher who is enraged at the exhausted farmers at the end of the week and does not tell them to rest in preparation for good work the following week.

Thoreau’s resort to such rational logic is purposeful as he wants the audience to be able to assess their life and themselves in order to determine a rough idea of their view and perception. An example of an “if…then” statement that utilizes deductive logic is: “If we respected only what is inevitable and has a right to be, music and poetry would resound along the streets.” In this “if…then” statement, Thoreau is trying to convey a larger idea: that by simply acknowledging what is meant to be, life would successfully function (music and poetry bit).

In the seventh paragraph, Thoreau alludes to Ulysses, who was "tied to the mast" while passing by the island of the Sirens. Thoreau uses this allusion to compare people giving up their complex lives to Ulysses, who could not run towards the Sirens. Thoreau uses this allusion to further emphasize the importance of leading a simple life.

In these paragraphs, Thoreau presents his case as both a nonconformist and a peacemaker; in paragraph 7, he says that to go at your own pace and says to ignore society’s call for action as you are not obligated. Thoreau is trying to convey that people should not worry about something in the present, even if other people are troubled over it. Furthermore, Thoreau sets up this idea in paragraph 6 by stating that if a man were to pause and consider the outcome of his choice, not just focused on the temporary matters, then man would discover that all important things hold weight. By saying to the whistle that it can no longer work, it would be realized that the truth is that while other people’s actions are out of your control, you can control you own reaction. Sometimes, even the slightest stylistic feature can work effectively as a rhetorical strategy.

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